[u]Infection[/u] (Uncensored)

this is my first real somewhat short story so wish me luck its called infection and here is a clue its about zombies so suck it! please read and Nash this is not the same Bill so dont yell at me.

Crash! The roof caves in over Josh's parents as the mad man, ax in hand, walks toward him. the tornado surounding them rips the house around him. the madman chases him down the road as Josh runs and runs as fast as he can. he trips over the root of a dead tree. Josh screems as he notices the blood gushing from his leg he had broken on the fall.

Boom! "ouch, my head" says Josh as he awakes from his horrible nightmare. Josh lives in his nice little home ina small town called Riverside Louisiana and shares his room with his older brother, Jake, who sleeps on he bunk above him.
"Morning Josh" says Jake as he turns and notices Josh is awake. "Quite a nightmare you must have had." says Jake "You woke me up at six in the morning with you turning and talking."
"Well its not my fault that i have the worst nightmares in this entire family, why dont you just get some ear plugs or get your own room!" yells Josh.
"Calm down it's ok with me i needed to get up early anyway, either way dont be dramatic your just mad because Kelly broke up with you yesterday." Says Jake trying to melo Josh out.
"Hey! i was going to break up with her anyway so it doesnt really madder." says Josh. "is dad around?"
"Nah he is out drinking again. he has been taking his friends death really hard. Ever since mom got hit by that truck it never has been the same" answers Jake.
"did they ever figure out how Keith died?"
"No but another homeless guy looking for money went on the news again saying he saw someone who looked like Keith walking around like some brain dead weirdo."
"Another one! dont they have any respect? he just died like a week ago and they are making up bull shit for air time." complains Josh
"Ya but what are you gunna do?"
Suddenly they hear a crash from the basement. they run down to see their dad with blood and cuts all over him. "Get to the garage!" they sprint to the garage and jump in the car. Their dad hits the gas and floors it.
"Whats going on?" asked Jake.
"That doesnt madder right now!" Bill, their dad, answers with a broken voice. "all the madders right now is that we get out of this god forsaken town."
Josh starts to panic. "Damit Bill tell us whats going on!" Bill rams into someone walking in the middle of the road "Holy Shit, what the hell! Shouldnt we go back and see if he is ok?"
"He wasnt ok when i hit him. Ok, i will explain this to you guys. I was at the bar." explains Bill. "Someone came in and walked over to me. He was getting a little close so i told him to back up and i pushed him back. When i reached out he bit me. I punched him in the face and he just started hitting me and didnt react to any of my hits."
Suddenly Bill started screaming in pain and slowed down the car. All of a sudden Bill turned his head and started screaming at them and jumped at Jake. Both Jake and Josh jumped out of the car and ranto the nearest house.
"Fucking let us in!" Yelled Josh
"Josh, look we are next to the school. Lets go" So they ran over to the school but when they tried to get in the doors were closed.
"Please, someone let us in!" Yells Josh someone walks over to the door with a shotgun and points it at them.
"Have you been biten?" He asks
"Not yet but we will if you dont let us in!" Jake says while pointing to Bill running toward them.
He lets them in.



To be continued... maybe i want to read replies first

I like the idea, not bad but work on the grammar a bit man. Keep going

you should keep it going and nice bill lol. DAMMIT BILL!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really like it. Only thing i would change is more insight on how Josh is feeling. like what he's thinking but thats just an idea. I totally love it those! zobielike storys are aweosme!

Cool! Although I red half of it and then made up the rest myself by saying and then the boys both died. But otherwise great!