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PostSubject: I figured I would toss up a poem.   I figured I would toss up a poem. EmptyWed Nov 04, 2009 11:52 pm

Please don't steal? I'm trusting ya'll. It's my work =]

She sits there with a knife, knowing her death is near.
She sits there with a knife, ready set herself free,
She takes each vein one by one,
Eeny Meeny Miney Mo...
She picks one and stabs into it, feeling the blood pour.

Not fast enough, she pierces more.

"Be careful not to stain anything,
your mother would hate you"
The demons teased,
the liquid flowed from
each one of her veins slowly.

"Oh, but she loves you.
People love you in this world,
don't do it!" A single angel
retorted, hoping that even
the force of one could save a life.
"you're a beautiful girl."

She looks down and sees herself,
the image of a woman, not yet full grown.
Many years to go, in her possible life,
but she sees just a girl,
just a girl, it's all she sees.

Why this was not good enough, she doesnt know,
but the puddle on the floor, it begins to grow.

The girl slipped further into her overdose of complete Inadequecy.

"That's right Darlin',
feel the death around you.
Each last breath."
The demons sang,
and one by one they came closer.
Along with her death,
that was coming so abrupt.

"But you have so much to live for!"
That single angel tried to interrupt.

"Don't listen to her, she's a woman.
Just like you. Worthless. Now,
do as I say." The girl began to tear up.
"A man wouldn't be crying!"
The demon screamed at the top of his lungs,
frieghtening the girl, scaring her away
From the life she once lived,
of truth, happiness and health,
Now she will give up, all of that wealth,

"See? Don't listen to him, he doesn't even value you!"
She tried so hard, that angel did, but she wasnt getting through.
But she would not give up, for she knew this girl needed her,
But the question was, how to get through to her.
The girl's desire, it was too strong to break,
So the angel would have to wait, until she would awake,
Above in the heavens, she would be at last,
If she listened to the demons,
And cut into herself so fast.

"There is nothing to value. You're a useless little girl.
Now Pierce that knife through you!"
The demon screamed, knowing she was afraid

"No!" The angel cried as the girl obeyed.

Alas, the girl let the demons pull her further and further under,
until she drowned in the pool of blood, sweat, and tears.
She gave up her bravery, and gave into her fears.
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PostSubject: Re: I figured I would toss up a poem.   I figured I would toss up a poem. EmptyWed Nov 04, 2009 11:56 pm

Nice and dark. Good job.
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PostSubject: Re: I figured I would toss up a poem.   I figured I would toss up a poem. EmptyThu Nov 05, 2009 12:00 am

Of course my poetry is good job. Of course I would toss up other shit, but you know me in rl, and I'm not gonna start crap in school, so I hold back lol =]
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PostSubject: Re: I figured I would toss up a poem.   I figured I would toss up a poem. EmptyThu Nov 05, 2009 5:36 pm

Amazing! 5/5.
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PostSubject: Re: I figured I would toss up a poem.   I figured I would toss up a poem. EmptyThu Nov 05, 2009 6:37 pm

Thanks <3 I like it haha. I love writing poetry. =]
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